“an immediately perceptible vitality about her as if the nerves of her body were continually smouldering”
Context: Nick describes Myrtle when he first meets her at her husband's garage in the Valley of Ashes.
Analysis
The "perceptible vitality" and "smouldering" nerves present Myrtle as sensual, energetic and full of suppressed desire. The fire imagery foreshadows the destructive passion that will consume her. Fitzgerald contrasts her vivid life-force with the grey, dead landscape of the Valley of Ashes she is desperate to escape.
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Exam Tip
Use to introduce Myrtle and her hunger for a better life. The "smouldering" fire imagery foreshadows her violent end.